How can I be the best version of myself

 Hi bloggers, this is my site 'How to the best version of myself'. We have been learning about this in Inquiry. 

I enjoyed creating this site and I found the smart goals very useful. What did you find most useful about this site?

Nelly The Elephant

 Hi bloggers today i'm going to tell you about Nelly the elephant so this is her story I did this in reading time.

Nelly the elephant was performing in the circus happily until the lion was jumping through the hoop of fire than something terrible happened, the lion was lit on fire by the fire ring the hole thing was ablaze Nelly was lucky to get out alive she watched in despair as the orange fire consumed the tent she was so sad her life dedication was ruined all she wanted was a happy life performing in the circus. When the flames were out she packed up all her things and said goodbye eventually she found lush green grass than a new tent she was so happy now she performed in that circus and lived a happy life that is Nelly's story.

I found this task very easy because I am very creative and good at thinking up ideas. 

What descriptive words do you think I did well and what do you think I can improve on?